小河的故事

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小河的故事
港河渡
2014/12/23

小河是大海留下的念想
大海远去了
留下一片沼泽荒滩
为了免除人间的水患
一位仙人
撑着铁船划过
身后留下了一条蔚蓝

小河最初直通大海
一泓清流
曾激起洄游生物
多少幸福的期待
一条大河截断了归途
挡潮闸
关闭了水路
也隔断了
小河均匀的呼吸
那些曾经的自由流淌
神话般飘向远方

在两河交汇的地方
有一个美丽的小村庄
旭日洒金
微波夕照
是我金色的童年
晨雾暮霭中
一条渡船
摇过了多少时光
芦花飞白长风浩荡
油菜花放
大地一片金黄
萤火虫闪过朦胧的夜
刺槐花开出
洁白芬芳
最是芦叶青葱时
一支长杆
钓尽了多少繁忙

虽然那些碧波
粼粼远去
那些夕阳炊烟
依旧袅袅牵断故人肠
那是我思乡的惆怅吗
小河水滋润心田
既不孤独
也不遥远

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[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]2014/12/23
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[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]大海远去了[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]留下一片沼泽荒滩[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]为了免除人间的水患[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]一位仙人[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]撑着铁船划过[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]身后留下了一条蔚蓝[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]小河最初直通大海[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]一泓清流[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]曾激起洄游生物[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]多少幸福的期待[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]一条大河截断了归途[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]挡潮闸[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]关闭了水路[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]也隔断了[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]小河均匀的呼吸[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]那些曾经的自由流淌[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]神话般飘向远方[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]在两河交汇的地方[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]有一个美丽的小村庄[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]旭日洒金[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]微波夕照[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]是我金色的童年[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]晨雾暮霭中[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]一条渡船[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]摇过了多少时光[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]芦花飞白长风浩荡[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]油菜花放[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]大地一片金黄[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]萤火虫闪过朦胧的夜[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]刺槐花开出[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]洁白芬芳[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]最是芦叶青葱时[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]一支长杆[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]钓尽了多少繁忙[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]虽然那些碧波[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]粼粼远去[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]那些夕阳炊烟[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]依旧袅袅牵断故人肠[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]那是我思乡的惆怅吗[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]小河水滋润心田[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]既不孤独[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]
[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]也不遥远[size=font-size:14.0pt,14.0pt]


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小河，流向大海，涓涓细流是家乡的味道。现在不孤独，不孤单，因为，有小河在陪伴。
此作温馨感人，中间一节内容令人惋惜，失去了原有的自然，即便这样，对于小河的情感不变。感动读者。学习中。

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