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月下伊人 发表于 2011-9-15 21:04:42

七绝   中庭月色指尖凉

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泪莫轻弹 发表于 2011-9-15 21:19:34

推一把，月下君要作记录了。

月下笛 发表于 2011-9-16 16:46:07

月下伊人这一组图文并茂，俺欣赏。但作为七绝，还有些瑕疵。如第一首吟在12侵，颦和人在11真，就叫孤鸟出群吧。第2首，最后一句失律了，可能格式混用了。总的不错。

月下伊人 发表于 2011-9-18 21:15:34

谢谢月下笛首句邻韵可否？第二首最后一句是绿了怎么当时没注意呢

月下笛 发表于 2011-9-19 12:30:07

伊人这个可以改改不？费事么？

月下笛 发表于 2011-11-6 21:10:18

再来欣赏

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